At 1046 words

For the record, peach flavored anything is quite frankly, disgusting.

Writing fiction is difficult. I have the broad strokes for my characters - who are both largely composites of people I've known, met, kissed, had feelings for, despised or been affected by. And a little bit of myself. I have to finish 4000 words in the next two days. I am 1048 of pure poetry, if I may say so myself.

I am looking for feedback - even if it's something as simple as "i love it" or "i hate it." I am wary of posting the work here right now but if you leave me a comment below (or email me) I'd love to email you back with the 1042 words that I have finished so far.

Pwetty please!